The Great Substack Story Challenge - II
I'm binging now. This was utterly fantastic. You've given me everything I need. Unless someone after you steals it from me. 🔥🔥🔥
And suddenly we have a genre twist! Binging on!
Wow! You gave us an action sequence that for me was very well balanced between pacing and level of detail. And now we have either an alien (or offworld human)? Probably an entire organization of them?? Way to get us even further hooked. Bravo!
Thank you! I do love writing action sequences. And I think I don't give myself enough opportunities to write them.
"It'll be a long time before I'm back on Earth again. Frankly, good riddance. The food here is terrible."
OMG YES I LOVE IT [head exploding emoji]
on the edge of my reading seat
Fun, exciting, and hilarious. Awesome read!
I'm binging now. This was utterly fantastic. You've given me everything I need. Unless someone after you steals it from me. 🔥🔥🔥
And suddenly we have a genre twist! Binging on!
Wow! You gave us an action sequence that for me was very well balanced between pacing and level of detail. And now we have either an alien (or offworld human)? Probably an entire organization of them?? Way to get us even further hooked. Bravo!
Thank you! I do love writing action sequences. And I think I don't give myself enough opportunities to write them.
"It'll be a long time before I'm back on Earth again. Frankly, good riddance. The food here is terrible."
OMG YES I LOVE IT [head exploding emoji]
on the edge of my reading seat
Fun, exciting, and hilarious. Awesome read!