Daaaaaang casket bomb! Didn’t see that coming at all
Also using “BLAM” is perfect haha.
I can’t believe they trusted Creighton that fast - what is stopping him from having multiple weapons, happy to throw one to fool them? I guess he knew he was outnumbered.
Definitely a fun twisty twist at the end there. When did you write this?
Mm. Pulpy.
You, sir, are versatile AF. 😏❤️🔥 I really enjoyed this.
From profoundly memorable, "She could be here, and not be his,"
to dripping with tropey jargon,
"..the crooked old doors opened and Arden McBride entered, accompanied by a fresh gust of hateful air,"
just what the doc ordered for a Monday nobody wanted!
Daaaaaang casket bomb! Didn’t see that coming at all
Also using “BLAM” is perfect haha.
I can’t believe they trusted Creighton that fast - what is stopping him from having multiple weapons, happy to throw one to fool them? I guess he knew he was outnumbered.
Definitely a fun twisty twist at the end there. When did you write this?
A year later, still awesome