The way this reads somehow creates a sensation of naturally moving swiftly along with Callan--the way most of us could move in our childhood imaginings, or in dreams--but with details that make it seem plausible. Love the quirky, bulky Vaird visit...a cluttery & amusing speed bump along the way. ;-)
Definitely feels like a sick iron man-esque type suit
Like, this is my favorite description of the suit by far so far:
“The armor is already interfaced with the burner phone, so he can look up flights. He won’t be buying a ticket, but he will be riding the next plane to New York.”
And then my favorite instance of humor in this chapter:
“In this position, he should cause minimal drag, which means less chance of being noticed, yes, but also it’s about courtesy.”
I also think it is funny he basically clocks everything in “jog time”
The way this reads somehow creates a sensation of naturally moving swiftly along with Callan--the way most of us could move in our childhood imaginings, or in dreams--but with details that make it seem plausible. Love the quirky, bulky Vaird visit...a cluttery & amusing speed bump along the way. ;-)
Definitely feels like a sick iron man-esque type suit
Like, this is my favorite description of the suit by far so far:
“The armor is already interfaced with the burner phone, so he can look up flights. He won’t be buying a ticket, but he will be riding the next plane to New York.”
And then my favorite instance of humor in this chapter:
“In this position, he should cause minimal drag, which means less chance of being noticed, yes, but also it’s about courtesy.”
I also think it is funny he basically clocks everything in “jog time”
Can’t wait to meet Marvy!